Nov 26, 2012

Romantic advice required


I mentioned last week that I wanted to do another back-story about Gottlob and Madeleine and their relationship. I decided to try my hand at writing a fairly romantic piece as it is an area which is difficult to do without becoming tacky and sentimental. This is something of an experiment and feedback is very much wanted.

So sharpen your claws and tell me what you love/hate about the next short story under Good Stuff Short story 2 Gottlob's story, part 1.
I have decided to split it into two parts so I can see what you think and perhaps build your feedback into the second part.

1 comment:

What do you think?