|Franz and Amadeus|
I'm working away analysing what needs to be changed in the earlier chapters at the moment. I think it's mostly a question of adding things rather than taking away. So, for example Celia needs to become nastier towards Franz (poor Franz!) about losing his job and she needs to become unpleasantly ambitious. I don't have a problem with ambition unless it leads to corruption of moral values and I think this is going to be where Celia will wobble.
As a change I'm also doing little sketches of the characters to add to the blog. Above you can find Franz and Amadeus.